from: 陳怡秀 xxx@gmail.com
to: Transcend Admissions Consultants <transcendadmissions@gmail.com>
date: Aug 25, 2011 at 10:45 PM
subject: Re: INSEAD

Hi David!

How have you been lately?  I am writing to let you know that after a LONG application process, I have been accepted and will enroll into the INSEAD MBA program in France! 

I want to send you my sincerest thanks for your hard work on my case.  I could always tell how much effort you put into enhancing the logic and persuasiveness of my essays while retaining my original ideas.  And many thanks for handling my many last minute requests so I could meet all the deadlines.  🙂

Because I started my applications a little bit late I didn’t have much confidence that I would be successful.  But the fact that I applied to 4 global top 10 MBA programs, and received all 4 interview invitations shows that my application materials were extremely high quality and attracted Adcom’s attention. 

A million thanks for your dedication to helping me succeed.  Let’s have dinner and celebrate in the near future!

Best Regards,

Lili